根据您提供的内容,我理解您需要修改一些句子或段落,使它们符合Las Vegas PD detective Max Dillon的故事情节。以下是对原始内容的一些建议:
1. 第一句:“Max Dillon, the first to arrest Danny.”
- 可以改为:“Max Dillon was the first to arrest Danny.”
2. 第二句:“Danny learns that Delinda is pregnant.”
- 可以改为:“Danny learned that Delinda was pregnant.”
3. 第三句:“of killing still missing Mary's dad, alone or with her.”
- 可以改为:“of killing the missing Mary's dad, alone or with her.”
4. 第四句:“until Mitch and Mike prove there must be another suspect.”
- 可以改为:“until Mitch and Mike confirmed there must be another suspect.”
5. 第五句:“Sam survives her kidnapping by dumping Vince Peterson in flight.”
- 可以改为:“Sam managed to escape her kidnapping by throwing Vince Peterson off a cliff in flight.”
6. 第六句:“Her disloyal attempt to recruit whales as investors fro the Montecito is fruitless.”
- 可以改为:“Her unsuccessful attempt to recruit whales as investors from the Montecito is fruitless.”
7. 第七句:“and late since gloomy cowboy Cooper already paid the tax arrear.”
- 可以改为:“and it was late since gloomy cowboy Cooper had already settled the tax arrears.”
请注意,这些修改是为了使句子更加流畅和连贯。您可以根据您的具体需求进一步调整这些建议。