拉斯维加斯 第五季

根据您提供的内容，我理解您需要修改一些句子或段落，使它们符合Las Vegas PD detective Max Dillon的故事情节。以下是对原始内容的一些建议： 1. 第一句：“Max Dillon, the first to arrest Danny.” - 可以改为：“Max Dillon was the first to arrest Danny.” 2. 第二句：“Danny learns that Delinda is pregnant.” - 可以改为：“Danny learned that Delinda was pregnant.” 3. 第三句：“of killing still missing Mary's dad, alone or with her.” - 可以改为：“of killing the missing Mary's dad, alone or with her.” 4. 第四句：“until Mitch and Mike prove there must be another suspect.” - 可以改为：“until Mitch and Mike confirmed there must be another suspect.” 5. 第五句：“Sam survives her kidnapping by dumping Vince Peterson in flight.” - 可以改为：“Sam managed to escape her kidnapping by throwing Vince Peterson off a cliff in flight.” 6. 第六句：“Her disloyal attempt to recruit whales as investors fro the Montecito is fruitless.” - 可以改为：“Her unsuccessful attempt to recruit whales as investors from the Montecito is fruitless.” 7. 第七句：“and late since gloomy cowboy Cooper already paid the tax arrear.” - 可以改为：“and it was late since gloomy cowboy Cooper had already settled the tax arrears.” 请注意，这些修改是为了使句子更加流畅和连贯。您可以根据您的具体需求进一步调整这些建议。